quarta-feira, 22 de setembro de 2010

Letter to the Editor by Caio Bonatti

Mr. or Mrs. Editor,

The so-called review published in your website about Christopher Nolan’s latest work, Inception, is wholly worthless. I see no more than a text entirely ideological, presenting political criticism in a poor and deliberately partial way. When one reads a movie review, certain patterns and characteristics are expected, mainly criticism about the movie, not about the ‘Glorification of Masculine Violence’ and ‘Cliché Hetero-Monogamous Love Story’. I do not know even how to start complaining but I can make an effort.

Violence is indeed a constant through the film, and thanks Nolan for that; a blockbuster without action would be unbearable. As you may think, violence is not on screen to pervert the audience; it is there because we want to see it. The rapture effected by fights and conflicts is in human nature; the thrill captivates us and Hollywood always knows how to please the major public. About the ‘Normalization of Violence against Black People’, seriously, stop nitpicking. In a cast in which we have actors and actresses from USA, England, Canada, Japan, France and one of Indian descent it is contradictory to talk about ‘Lack of Diversity’. Moreover, it is very prejudiced to call Dileep Rao a ‘vaguely middle-eastern type’.

I will skip over the ‘No Originality’ and ‘Cheerleading for Capitalism’ issues as they would demand so much talking; just a few words: originality does exist in the movie and Capitalism is the current economic system, get used to see it everywhere. To finish, the ‘Cliché Hetero-Monogamous Love Story’ as described by you is pointless and comes from a radical feminist point of view. Should we burn every copy of Romeo & Juliet?

The premises of the text are not based on qualities or flaws of the movie; instead, they are deliberately based on social-political issues that do not interest the audience of Inception. It is a heist film with psychological suspense, not a definitive portrait of modern society.

Caio Bonatti

Source: http://www.indybay.org/newsitems/2010/09/09/18658327.php 

Letter to the Editor

Mr(s). Editor,

I write you concerning the article titled “Atriz diz que assistente acusada de envenená-la é psicopata published in the journalistic section of the website you manage.

After reading it very attentively, I could notice some mistakes and information that could be given in a better way in order to grant more serious status to your product. First of all, I want to call your attention to the name of the actress Gabriela Spanic. I think you don’t have a close relationship to call her by a nickname such as Gaby, and even if you did, I don’t think this kind of reference could bring your website a good image.

Moreover, I, as a Translation Course’s student whose one of the studying languages is Spanish, feel the obligation to advert you that the word “asistenta” is “maid” and not “assistant” as your virtual newspaper showed us. Of course you could keep the literacy translation, but it seems that this translation was made with no attention and no knowledge of Spanish language.

 Still considering the translation presented, some fragments sounded artificial, accusing that the one who translated it has done a bad work.

Besides what has been presented above, I verified misspelled words ­– “inteligante” – and unnecessary terms – “Sinto que que alguém…” -, which confirms what I complain here: lack of attention at writing the text.

Although many errors reported, I found your article impartial and I liked the way you presented the case, showing that the maid is only a suspect and not the guilty of the murder attempt. I hope you can receive the suggestions well in order to improve your website’s quality and require more attention at reviewing texts.

Yours truly,

 

Fábio.

 

Source article: http://noticias.terra.com.br/mundo/noticias/0,,OI4692169-EI8140,00-Atriz+diz+que+assistente+acusada+de+envenenala+e+psicopata.html

Letter to the editor - Shen

Mind control: Is the internet changing how we think?


The internet has become an indispensable instrument of communication and an entertaining media. Nowadays, almost everything depends on it, so, how can it be harmful for us? As far as I am concerned, internet, as well as everything in our life, must have control and limits. If we can make a good use of this resource, it can help us a lot; otherwise, it can really change our minds and control us.
We are surrounded more and more by the internet and we are amazed by its convenience (actually, it is a mixture of TV, radio, book and all the other medias). Therefore, people become so dependent on it and do not even think about the consequences of its overuse. Obviously, everything must have limits and control. When we overuse something, of course, it will be harm for us. However, we cannot let it control what we think, but we have to make a good use of it.
If we know how to make a good use of the internet, it is probably the best instrument of working, entertaining, communicating, etc. So, my conclusion is that, although the internet is very useful, we have to discern it from our reality, it means, we have to be aware of the resources around us, it does not matter which kind of instrument is (TV, radio, videogame, etc), by this, we can have the capacity to control them, and not the opposite.

terça-feira, 21 de setembro de 2010

Louise Mira - A letter to the editor of The Sun newspaper

Last July, during the World Cup, you wrote an article listing the worst players of the competition. And I must confess I was really surprised by the way you talked about the players, specially Kaka.
Just because they didn’t play the way everyone expected it doesn’t mean they didn’t try hard to. Sometimes you just seem to forget that human being make mistakes! And as a tabloid all you want is to exaggerate the news so that they look more interesting. But you lie and judge all the time! Is it what you call ‘job’? I use to call it ‘shame’.
The arguments used in the article don’t make any sense at all. You refered to Kaka as ‘the UN's youngest World Food Ambassador’, because ‘he gave his opponents everything on a plate’. Do you think it is funny? I don’t! Kaka did an amazing job – he was hurt, and even so he played and did his best for Brazil. And you didn’t even consider it.
Congratulations, The Sun. That’s why you are the worst newspaper in UK and that’s why I don’t believe a word you say.

Based on http://www.thesun.co.uk/sol/homepage/sport/football/worldcup2010/3052919/World-Cup-worst-XI.html

segunda-feira, 20 de setembro de 2010

Letter to the editor - Beatriz Reis

            Letter to the Editor:
            As an avid reader of the Daily Telegraph and fan of historical narratives, I must say that I was very much surprised and upset by the article on the BBC series The Tudors, for it was actually described with a single word: inaccurate.
            It is known that The Tudors’ episodes have historical errors and inaccuracies: an important pope substituted by his successor, a Henry VIII that never got fat, and others related to the wardrobe of the characters, which belonged to the Victorian era, as well as coaches. The scriptwriters may indeed have taken liberties with the historical facts, but it has to be said that the BBC series has also succeeded in re-creating the drama and atmosphere of Henry VIII's royal court, with its intrigues, scandals, accusations and betrayals. It is also undeniable that the show has stimulated interest in British history all over the world, due to its involving and highly entertaining plot, based, and that only, on the beginning of the dynasty's story.
            The Tudors is a historical drama, not a documentary, and, for that reason, its improbable storylines, dodgy costumes and inaccurate details are perfectly forgivable; the show has so many other qualities that it will remain worth watching.

Beatriz Costa Reis
São José do Rio Preto


quinta-feira, 9 de setembro de 2010

First post

Oi, gente!

Como todos devem saber, esse é o blog da turma para discutir sobre os textos na aula de Prática de Redação II. Então, aproveitem o espaço com carinho e não deixem de postar as suas opiniões, comentários, etc. para que possamos melhorar no decorrer do curso.

Atenciosamente,

Shen